Looks fantastic! I love the story and overall style of your film. I especially like the scene at 0:48, great staging and juxtapose between her and the characters. Colors look amazing as well.
Just a few things to point out. As the class noted, be aware of the chalk hands because they do resemble paint brushes in the animatic. Also, 0:50 with her against the wall is a little unclear - are they flashbacks or characters throwing paint at her? Overall, the scene does feel a little long.
It's important you finish your animatic by this week so you can begin on the basic animation. All in all, good job so far and keep up the awesome work!
Looks fantastic! I love the story and overall style of your film. I especially like the scene at 0:48, great staging and juxtapose between her and the characters. Colors look amazing as well.
ReplyDeleteJust a few things to point out. As the class noted, be aware of the chalk hands because they do resemble paint brushes in the animatic. Also, 0:50 with her against the wall is a little unclear - are they flashbacks or characters throwing paint at her? Overall, the scene does feel a little long.
It's important you finish your animatic by this week so you can begin on the basic animation. All in all, good job so far and keep up the awesome work!